Thursday, January 14, 2010

55 words

she looks down
she looks across
she rubs her head
tapping her knee

she speaks

what was that?
what did you say?
i forgot
its too hard
why me?

i repeat
AGAIN
i repeat

she checks the menu for tomorrows lunch
she sharpens her pencil
she sits
she speaks

what did you say?
i forgot


55 word Friday...Tell a story ....check him out here to really see how its done. ;-)

4 comments:

otin said...

That is how it's really done! I thought it was great!

Brian Miller said...

aw. you make me blush. smiles.

no, you got it right, right here. that is how it is done. very nice 55!

The Daily Dean Chronicals said...

Cool! I have missed your blogs! I am blogging today!

Maggie said...

Very nice!